Postoperative Radiation Referral Rates for Metastatic Bone Disease Within the Veteran’s Health Administration and at an Academic Center
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Comments: The Discussion illustrates the importance of the quality benchmark for referral to radiation, depending upon the patient population, for providing high quality and equitable care to patients. The study further highlights the limitations of the retrospective study conducted. The authors present an inclusive analysis of the rates that provides a useful starting point for the consideration of possible quality metrics. Lastly, the Conclusion underlines the nationwide variation in referral rate that will help in establishing radiation referral benchmarks for high-reliability care.
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Comments: There are few issues found in the manuscript, which are as follows:
· In Background section under Introduction, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence, “Existing literature suggests that patients with metastatic bone diseased are best served …” should be written as “Existing literature suggests that patients with metastatic bone diseases are best served…”.
· Under Discussion, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence, “The high proportion of patients referred at the VHA group and at the academic medical center is consistent with recommendations” should be rewritten as “The high proportion of patients referred to the VHA group and at the academic medical center, is consistent with recommendations”.
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Comments: The Research puts forth a retrospective cohort study highlighting postoperative radiation referral rates for metastatic bone disease within the Veteran’s Health Administration (VHA) and academic center. The observed regional variation within the VHA indicates the importance of establishing quality benchmarks. The Research provides the elaborated study design, demographics, statistical analysis, covariates, the outcome variables and comes up with the possible results.
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Corresponding AuthorKenneth R Gundle
Department of Orthopaedics & Rehabilitation, Oregon Healtuh & Science University, Portland, Oregon, USA
Article TypeResearch Article
Publication historyReceived: Tue 28, Dec 2021
Accepted: Wed 12, Jan 2022
Published: Fri 28, Jan 2022
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