Cognitive Function in Cystic Fibrosis and CFTR Modulator Therapy
Cognitive Function in Cystic Fibrosis and CFTR Modulator Therapy
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Discussion & Conclusion
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Comments: The Discussion highlights the cognitive domains assessed in both the ivacaftor (IVA) and Ivacaftor in combination with lumacaftor (LUM/IVA) studies showed promising results for the gene-modulator therapy in CF using different measures. It also discussed the importance of improvements in the executive functional areas. The Discussion further briefly described the limitations of the study. Lastly, the conclusion suggests that further prospective cohort-controlled studies on gene modulation therapy are required to confirm any potential neurological role of IVA and LUM/IVA.
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Further comments on the paper
Comments: The research aimed at studying the effects of cystic fibrosis transmembrane conductance regulator (CFTR) modulators ivacaftor and lumacaftor/ivacaftor on cognition in two separate CF cohorts. The results significantly showed the improvement in CFTR modulator treatment. The manuscripts have illustrated the methods of the ivacaftor study providing the relevant results in the tabular form.
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Author Info
Judy Allen-Graham Elyssa Williams Catherine Rang Brenda Button Deirdre Edgeworth Felicity Finlayson Toby Winton-Brown Tom Kotsimbos Dominic Keating John Wilson
Corresponding Author
Judy Allen-GrahamCystic Fibrosis Service, Alfred Health, Melbourne, Australia
Article Info
Article Type
Research ArticlePublication history
Received: Mon 06, Jun 2022Accepted: Mon 20, Jun 2022
Published: Mon 11, Jul 2022
Copyright
© 2023 Judy Allen-Graham. This is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution License, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. Hosting by Science Repository.DOI: 10.31487/j.PDR.2022.01.01