Manual Cranial Treatment in a Young Woman with Anorexia Nervosa: A Case Report

Review Data

Purpose and Significance of Study: This is a report of a case of anorexia nervosa in which the manual cranial treatment employed was surprisingly successful. The pleasing course may encourage clinicians to consider manual cranial treatment in similar cases.

Fit with Scope of Journal: The manuscript is of very high interest for the journal Journal of Clinical and Medical Case Reports.

There are some minor errors (already corrected in the galley proof), which are listed below –

The common errors are –

·       Omission of “,”, e.g., after “death” in the 2^nd sentence of Background in the Abstract, after “schema” in the 1^st sentence of the 3^rd paragraph of the Background, and so on.

·       Omission of articles, e.g., “a” before “delayed” in the last sentence of the 1^st paragraph of the Background, before “few” in the 3^rd sentence of the 2^nd paragraph, and so on.

·       “Life-threatening”, “evidence-based”, and “four-week” must be hyphenated.

·       “A” must rather be referred to as “the patient”.

The other errors are –

In the Abstract –

  Under Case report –

·       In the 2^nd sentence, “is” must be inserted after “approach”.

  Under Conclusion –

·       In the 1^st sentence, “correlate” must be replaced with “correlates”.

In the Background –

  In the 1^st paragraph –

·       In the 1^st sentence, “to” before “death” must be removed.

·       In the 2^nd sentence, “occasionally” must be replaced with “occasional”, and “in” before it must be removed.

·       In the 4^th sentence, “only interest in life circles” must be replaced with “life of the patient revolves”.

  In the 2^nd paragraph –

·       In the 3^rd sentence, “bradycardias” must be replaced with “bradycardia”.

  In the 3^rd paragraph –

·       In the 1^st sentence, “shows” must be replaced with “results in”.

  In the 4^th paragraph –

·       In the 3^rd sentence, “a” before “reduced” must be removed.

In the Case history –

  In the 2^nd paragraph –

·       In the 2^nd sentence, “bodyweight” must be written as a single word.

·       In the 6^th sentence, “,” before “if” must be removed.

·       In the 10^th sentence, “an” before “AN” must be removed.

In the Follow-up –

  In the 2^nd paragraph –

·       In the 2^nd sentence, “,” after “felt” must be removed.

·       In the last sentence, “:” must be replaced with “–”, and “and” must be inserted before “meeting”.

  In the last paragraph –

·       “,” before “eating” must be replaced with “;”.

In the Discussion –

  In the 3^rd paragraph –

·       In the 1^st sentence, “bases” must be replaced with “based”, and “Sutherland” must be replaced with “Sutherland’s view”.

  In the last paragraph –

·       In the 8^th sentence, “,” before “but” must be removed.

If you have any questions and clarifications you can write to the journal.

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Science Repository Team