Congenital Mesoblastic Nephroma: Our Experience in the Last 26 Years

Congenital Mesoblastic Nephroma: Our Experience in the Last 26 Years

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Purpose and Significance of Study: This study is a single-centre retrospective analysis of 11 cases (over 26 years) of congenital mesoblastic nephroma in Spain in terms of demographic, clinical, diagnostic, therapeutic, survival and follow-up variables.

Fit with Scope of Journal: The manuscript is of very high interest for the journal Clinical Oncology and Cancer Biology.

o   There are some minor errors in the manuscript, which are listed below –

 

In the Abstract –

 

·       In the 1st sentence, “CMN” must be put within parenthesis, and “frequent” must be replaced with “common”.

·       In the 2nd sentence, “infrequent” must be replaced with “rare”, and “in the general population” must be inserted after it.

·       In the 3rd sentence, “to” must be inserted before “present”, and “study” after “retrospective” must be replaced with “analysis”.

·       In the 5th sentence, “’” must be inserted after “patients”, and “,” must be inserted after “out”.

·       In the 6th sentence, “,” after “males” must be replaced with “;”, and “of” must be inserted after “cases”.

·       In the 7th sentence, “patients” after “3” must be removed.

·       In the 8th sentence, “,” must be inserted after “nephrectomy”.

·       In the 9th sentence, “with” after “related” must be replaced with “to”.

·       In the last sentence, “the” before “recurrence” must be removed, and “,” must be inserted after “possible”.

In the Introduction –

 

  In the 1st paragraph –

·       In the 1st sentence, “,” must be inserted after “childhood”.

·       In the last sentence, “a” before “worse” must be removed, “prognosis” must be followed by “,”, and “associated” must be replaced with “prescribed”.

  In the 2nd paragraph –

·       In the 1st sentence, “low” must be followed by “,”, “of” after “reported” must be removed, and “patients” must be replaced with “cases”.

  In the 3rd paragraph –

·       “years” must be followed by “,”.

In the Materials and Methods –

 

  In the 1st paragraph –

·       In the 1st sentences, “was conducted” must be inserted at the end.

  In the 2nd paragraph –

·       “patient’s” must be replaced with “patients’”.

In the Results –

 

  In the 1st paragraph –

·       In the 1st sentence, “an” must be inserted before “anatomopathological”.

·       In the 2nd sentence, “,” must be inserted after “males”.

·       In the 3rd sentence, “of the patients” at the end must be removed.

·       The last sentence must be re-written as “The diagnosis was prenatal in one of the patients, it was done in the first three months of life in nine patients and at two years in one patient”.

  In the 2nd paragraph –

·       In the 1st sentence, “service” must be replaced with “centre”.

  In the 3rd paragraph –

·       In the 3rd sentence, “,” must be inserted after “two of them”.

·       In the last sentence, “,” after “examinations” must be removed.

  In the 5th paragraph –

·       In the 1st sentence, “,” must be inserted after “metastasis” and “case”, and “Vincristina” must be replaced with “Vincristine”.

  In the last paragraph –

·       “the” and “time” must be removed, and “,” must be inserted after “present”.

In the Discussion –

 

  In the 1st paragraph –

·       In the 1st sentence, “the” before “neonatal” must be replaced with “a”.

  In the 3rd paragraph –

·       In the 1st sentence, “The” must be inserted at the start, and “described” must be replaced with “reported”.

  In the 5th paragraph –

·       In the 1st sentence, “,” after “variants” must be replaced with “–”.

  In the 6th paragraph –

·       “,” before “hence” must be replaced with “;”.

Author Info

Corresponding Author
Anna Sánchez Llopis
Urology Department, Hospital General Universitario de Castellón, Castellón, Spain

Article Info

Article Type
Research Article
Publication history
Received: Mon 23, Mar 2020
Accepted: Thu 02, Apr 2020
Published: Mon 27, Apr 2020
Copyright
© 2023 Anna Sánchez Llopis. This is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution License, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. Hosting by Science Repository.
DOI: 10.31487/j.COCB.2020.01.01