Folding of Levator Palpebrae Superioris Muscle to Correct Blepharoptosis Caused by Overuse of Eyes in Young People: A Case Report
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Comments: The Conclusion states that the surgical procedure for the correction of blepharoptosis is simple and yields an effective result. It further highlights that this surgical procedure can be applied in patients with weak aponeurosis of levator palpebrae.
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Comments: There are few errors found in the manuscript, which are as follows; the highlighted portion must be checked by the author:
· In Abstract, 3rd sentence, “During the operation, we can find that the aponeurosis of upper eyelid has became weak and partially ruptured, so we use folding to repair the aponeurosis…” is reframed as “During the operation, we found that the aponeurosis of upper eyelid has become weak and partially ruptured, so we used, folding to repair the aponeurosis…”
· Under Case Presentation, 1st paragraph, 6th sentence, the word “neoforint” has been misspelled and is not clearly understood.
· In the 5th paragraph, 1st sentence of Case Presentation that states, “Because the reason of aponeurosis blepharoptosis is the rupture or defect of aponeurosis” must be written as “Because the reason for aponeurosis blepharoptosis is the rupture or defect of aponeurosis”.
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Comments: The manuscript presents a 21-year-old male with conjunctivitis followed by secondary ptosis. This further discusses the surgical procedure in the folding of levator palpebrae superioris muscle to correct blepharoptosis. It also points out the reason behind the cause of aponeurosis blepharoptosis.
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Corresponding AuthorNi Zhimin
Department of Plastic Surgery, Guangzhou Qinghua Porcelain Xinghe Medical Beauty Clinic, Guangzhou, China
Article TypeCase Report
Publication historyReceived: Mon 12, Jul 2021
Accepted: Mon 26, Jul 2021
Published: Mon 16, Aug 2021
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