Evaluation of Postpartum Counseling on Future Health Risks Associated with Hypertensive Disorders of Pregnancy

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Purpose and Significance of Study: The study evaluates, both quantitatively as well as qualitatively, the status of postpartum counselling received by women with hypertensive disorders of pregnancy against the recommendations laid down by the American College of Obstetricians and Gynaecologists and the American Heart Association. This is a single centre study on 74 women in the US.

Fit with Scope of Journal: The manuscript is of very high interest for the Journal of Integrative Cardiology Open Access.

 

o   The manuscript is well-written. A few minor corrections (already incorporated in the galley proof) required are listed below –

 

In the Abstract –

  Under Results –

·       In the 3^rd sentence, “;” both times must be replaced with “,”, and “the” must be inserted before “lifelong”.

In the Introduction –

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·       In the 1^st sentence, “the” must be inserted before “assessment of cardiovascular risk”.

In the Materials and Methods –

  Under Study design –

·       In the 3^rd sentence, “the” must be inserted before “women”, and “were” after “women” must be removed.

  Under Patient population –

·       In the 1^st sentence, “ages” must be replaced with “aged”.

·       In the 3^rd sentence, “severe-persistent” must be replaced with “severe persistent”.

  Under Covariates and outcomes –

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·       In the 1^st sentence, “,” must be inserted after “surveys”.

·       In the 3^rd sentence, “the” must be inserted before “increased”.

·       In the last sentence, “the” must be inserted before “initial”.

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·       “,” must be inserted after “care”.

  Under Analysis –

·       In the 1^st sentence, “χ²” must be replaced with “Chi-square”.

·       In the 2^nd sentence, “the” must be inserted before “normality”.

·       In the 3^rd sentence, “backwards” must be replaced with “backward”.

Author Info

Elizabeth S. Langen Jennifer Lewey Jourdie Triebwasser

Corresponding Author

Jourdie Triebwasser
Assistant Professor, Division of Maternal-Fetal Medicine, Perelman School of Medicine, University of Pennsylvania, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, USA

Article Info

Article Type

Research Article

Publication history

Received: Mon 23, Mar 2020
Accepted: Thu 09, Apr 2020
Published: Tue 14, Apr 2020

Copyright

© 2023 Jourdie Triebwasser. This is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution License, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. Hosting by Science Repository.
DOI: 10.31487/j.JICOA.2020.02.05