Accommodative Haptics Study Based on Flexible Amplification Mechanism
Accommodative Haptics Study Based on Flexible Amplification Mechanism
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researchers?
A: Very good
Abstract & Keywords
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Goal
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Structure
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Tools and Methods
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A: Very good
Discussion & Conclusion
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A: Very good
Comments:
The Discussion section aptly summarizes the observations of the study with the help of relevant literature. It stresses on the significance of a novel haptic, based on four-stage amplification mechanism which appears to produce improved lens power, increased near vision and high displacement amplification ratio in pseudophakic patients. Less than 5% error between theoretical method and finite element analysis (FEA) further validates the current research.
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Comments: The word “pseudophakic” is misspelled in the text section of the article.
Further comments on the paper
Comments: This study provides a valuable insight into the analysis and design of ‘focus shift’ intraocular lens technology (IOL) based on flexure hinges. The development of a modified haptics design allows the optic lens to move forward in connection with haptics as a result of the transmission of ciliary muscle contraction. This study also evaluates the effectiveness of lever-type and bridge-type flexible amplification mechanisms by calculating the amplification ratio of the proposed four-stage amplifier which results in an improved lens power, higher displacement amplification ratio and better near visual performance for pseudophakic patients. The effectiveness of compliance features of flexure hinges, mechanism dimension and amplification ratio based on finite-element analysis (FEA) and experimental methods are also analysed in this study.
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Author Info
Qiuyue Du Wenjing Chen Bin Tian Wenjing Wang
Corresponding Author
Wenjing WangInstitute of Artificial Intelligence, Beijing Technology and Business University, Beijing, China
Article Info
Article Type
Research ArticlePublication history
Received: Tue 24, Nov 2020Accepted: Thu 10, Dec 2020
Published: Wed 23, Dec 2020
Copyright
© 2023 Wenjing Wang. This is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution License, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. Hosting by Science Repository.DOI: 10.31487/j.JBEM.2020.01.03