The Evolution of Oral Care Products: Accompanied by the Social Progress

The Evolution of Oral Care Products: Accompanied by the Social Progress

Review Data

Q: Is the topic relevant to the journal area of interest? Is it contemporary and interesting for researchers?

A: Excellent

 

Abstract & Keywords

Q: Are all required components included in the abstract? Are the keywords appropriately chosen?

A: Very good

 

Goal

Q: Is the goal explicitly stated in the Introduction? Is its formulation clear and unambiguous?

A: Very good

 

Structure

Q: Is the paper's structure coherent? Is it in coherence with the goal of the paper?

A: Very good

 

Tools and Methods

Q: Are methods the author uses adequate and well used?

A: Excellent

 

Discussion & Conclusion

Q: Is it related to the results presented before? Do you consider them as coherent?

A: Excellent

 

Comments: The Discussion section, with the help of adequate relevant literature provides a valuable insight into the history, current market situation and future perspectives of commercial oral care products which are widely used to clean teeth, refresh breath, prevent and release oral diseases. It also emphasizes on the significance of augmented reality (AR) and virtual reality (VR) to direct consumers to keep good oral care routines.

 

Literature

Q: Does the author utilize relevant literature?

A: Excellent

 

Author's knowledge

Q: What is the level of the author’s knowledge? Does the author utilize all recent contributions relevant to the topic?

A: Very good

 

Length

Q: Is the length of the paper adequate to the significance of the topic? Do you suggest shortening the paper without losing its value?

A: Good

 

Figures & Tables

Q: Does the author use them suitably? Are legend and notations clear?

A: Very good

 

Writing style

Q: Is it clear and understandable?

A: Good

 

Comments:

·       In the 2nd sentence of the 3rd paragraph of the “Toothbrush” under the section of “The development of oral care products”, The word “variety” should be replaced with “various” before “kinds of toothbrushes”.

·       In the 3rd sentence of the 4th paragraph of the “Toothbrush” under the section of “The development of oral care products”, “of” should be inserted before “harm”.

·       The 12th sentence of the 9th paragraph of the “Toothbrush” under the section of “The development of oral care products” should be rephrased as “However, a research done on 26 dental students to compare the 3D toothbrush, the rotating-oscillating toothbrush…”

·       In the last sentence of the 6th paragraph of the “Dentifrice” under the section of “The development of oral care products”, the word “manufactures” should be replaced with “manufacturers”.

·       In the 5th sentence of the 2nd paragraph of the “Mouthwash” under the section of “The development of oral care products”, the word “profession” should be replaced with “professionals”.

 

Further comments on the paper

Comments: This review article demonstrates the history, current situations and future expectations of various oral care products, largely available on the market. It provides information extending from the products used by our ancestors to those currently available. The products that are elaborately discussed in this article include toothbrush, dentifrice, toothpick, mouthwash, dental floss and some other products. This study is of significance as it offers an in-depth knowledge regarding the current developments of oral care products in order to maintain a good oral hygiene and to prevent the occurrence of serious systemic conditions.

 

Q: Would you recommend this manuscript for further publication?

A: Yes - Suitable to be published

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Author Info

Corresponding Author
Jinlin Song
College of Stomatology, Chongqing Medical University, Chongqing, PR China

Article Info

Article Type
Review Article
Publication history
Received: Wed 20, Jan 2021
Accepted: Wed 03, Feb 2021
Published: Mon 22, Feb 2021
Copyright
© 2021 Jinlin Song. This is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution License, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original author and source are credited. Hosting by Science Repository. All rights reserved.
DOI: 10.31487/j.DOBCR.2021.01.05